Your Representative

A warning label should have been attached to your chest,
You wanted me to see the devil at his best.
I never knew you,
Just your representative,
I was genuine and concrete,
But the plans you made were tentative.
Your rep portrayed the vision you were my man,
The real monster inside had a different plan.
It was all a perception of what you wanted me to see,
And everything you said was just what you wanted me to believe,
All those promises you made were disgustingly empty.
You painted me a beautiful picture with bright colors,
To my surprise you were painting that for others,
The fire you lit for me you knew you would smother,
While I was falling for you, you were searching for another.
Your rep portrayed the vision you were my man,
Replaying the memories of us walking hand in hand,
Me touching your face and submerged in the moment,
Hypnotized by your spell that was the definition of potent.
The sickening truth that I believed you were my baby,
From your perspective I was just a maybe.
I wish I could say you’ll never find another like me,
But you will, and that’s what kills me.
I hope you burn and no one hears you scream,
When your plan backfires on your need to deceive.
When you meet someone, you just meet their rep.Sometimes you unveil true colors that were the opposite of what you were sold.
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12 09 2011.
I feel your pain. It is hard
I feel your pain. It is hard to discover a genuinely good person whose intentions are to see you happy. And to be honest, whoever the agent was would never meet anyone else like you. Inspired writing and breathtaking eloquence
12 09 2011.
Thank you...I appreciate you
Thank you...I appreciate you for appreciating emotion:)
12 09 2011.
Very nice love poem (as
Very nice love poem (as always :-)
12 09 2011.
Thank you:)
Thank you:)
12 20 2011.
WOW !!! girl you got talent,
WOW !!! girl you got talent, that was awesome. A lot of your poem's are a lot like mines. This poem makes me think of my poem called "DEVIL". Check out some of my poems. *snaps fingers*
12 22 2011.
lol *snaps back*...thanks for
lol *snaps back*...thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it:) I'll have to check out your poems as well:)
12 23 2011.
That's some real truth. I
That's some real truth. I loved the poem's style and story. Unfortunately you really don't know a person until you really know a person and that takes time. They always seem like the best person in the world when you first meet them. I'm not a stranger to leading girls on which I've been accused of but purposely doin it is just being a player. When you livin that life the karma that comes back on you won't be nice. Keep writin great poetry baby girl.
12 28 2011.
Thanks:) Unfortunatley its a
Thanks:) Unfortunatley its a part of life...people play and get played at some point in their lives...