A Little Bit Of Hope

Dexsta Ray's picture
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Fortification
Trouble knocked upon the door and was waiting
For every new accomplishment
This was the compensation
I've confiscated every negative approach
Thrown into the furnace
And then politely off the boat
Couldn't stand to watch it smoke
Some choke at the thought of confusion
But what it all boils down to
Lost in illusions
Cause' if you thought you were losing
Then what else should you expect?
Debt dictated mind
All she could do was stress
Be vexed
Like the Law of Attraction was just a joke
Pray daily
You can't get what you're asking without some hope


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Adele W's picture

Amen!!  This piece is FIYAH!!  Very Powerful and Brilliant!!  Great job!!:-)

meganloves13's picture

You're deep. And you have a large vocabulary I might add lol nice write

moogster's picture

Wow, I love the feel the style, flow and wisdom. What a great write, Yesvwe need a lot of hope too. Well done. Best wishes. Moogie. Your excellent.