Blanket

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Submitted by twelveof8 on Sun, 01/27/2013 - 1:32pm
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My blanket of white

Ensnared, entrapped, covers with

Spring warmth seeping through.

Behind The Poem: 

Thinking about my situation and the weather.


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Submitted by meganloves13 on Sun, 01/27/2013 - 1:50pm.

ihad a feeling this was haiku while i was reading it. i listened to the syllables, then i saw in your tags that it is:) Nice poem<3

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Submitted by twelveof8 on Sun, 01/27/2013 - 1:55pm.

Thank you very much. 

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Submitted by PoeticSensationz on Mon, 01/28/2013 - 9:38am.

Very sweet with a soft elegant feel about it. Nice way of using your words. Thank you for sharing.

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Submitted by twelveof8 on Mon, 01/28/2013 - 1:41pm.

Thank you for your kind words and for taking the time to read it. :)

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Submitted by Faith on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 8:33am.

I like that its short. Well put:)

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Submitted by twelveof8 on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 8:58pm.

Thank you very much.  :)

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Submitted by SNP on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 6:44pm.

Nice short poem. I'm sick of all this cold weather too, the summer's mine!

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Submitted by twelveof8 on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 8:57pm.

I like Spring and Fall the best.  :D  Warm days and cool night to snuggle up under the covers.