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Rapunzel

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the earth is spinning
as she's dancing;
she's grinning
and prancing,
but not romancing

the money keeps flying
but her clothes are on;
they're all lying,
sanity long gone;
it's half past dawn

the whistles keep coming
from men down below
their mouths keep running,
oh, don't they know?
she's got nowhere to go.

"rapunzel, rapunzel,
let down your long hair!"
her curls are in a bundle,
but she just won't share;
it wouldn't be fair.

she's not coming down,
for she is too keen
to drop her nightgown
onto the grass so green;
men can be so mean.

she's never left the tower,
but she already knows
that they only want her
when she's not wearing clothes;
that's how the story goes.

so rapunzel will wait
for a sky that's not gray;
when her prince opens the gate,
and whisks her away;
for more than a day.

Behind The Poem: 

a totally random, on-the-spot poem about a "rapunzel" who hasn't gotten out much, but knows that there are men out there who will shower her with compliments, but don't really love her... like her prince will.


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Hidden's picture

This is an AMAZING poem!!!!

This is an AMAZING poem!!!! x) It is well written!!

Morrison69's picture

I agree Its a wonderful poem!

I agree Its a wonderful poem! :)

aj60scnat's picture

i agree very much with these

i agree very much with these guys, good poem as always. it never suprises me when i read a poem of yours and its 5 star literature, very very good.

tellmeaboutit201's picture

i agree with EVERYONE

i agree with EVERYONE commenting lol :P this is probably one of you best! i love how you can turn something so true (and slightly sad that it happens this way) into something beautiful with your writing. :)

storyofmylife's picture

oh my gosh guys! haha i woke

oh my gosh guys! haha i woke up and logged onto hear and i have all these wonderful comments. thank you so much, all of you just made my day(:

Anonymous's picture

beautiful. i wish i could

beautiful. i wish i could write peotry like this. stunning.

storyofmylife's picture

awh thank you! i bet you're a

awh thank you! i bet you're a great writer.

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