Heart Broken Puzzle
I walk beside her
she told me she had bad news
I wonder If she left me another dude
She doesn't give me any hints or clues
Life would never be the same if you're the one I lose
We walk beside each other in the hallway
Will this finally be the day
That she tells me what she has to say
She said I just have to wait
I go to her locker and say tell me your secret
Nothing can ever between this
The bond that we have
Now I'm sad
The news is that she was leaving
She stole my heart like a thief
When I'm alone she is the one I'm needing
She broke my heart but she could fill in the missing piece
10 15 2010.
PLEASE DEAR GOD, HELP THESE
PLEASE DEAR GOD, HELP THESE PEOPLE LEARN ENGLISH AND GRAMMAR. PLEASE LEARN THE DIFFERENCE IN 'YOUR' AND 'YOU'RE' FOR STARTERS.
10 15 2010.
uh ok lol what are u talking
uh ok lol what are u talking about?
10 15 2010.
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10 15 2010.
To Sally: Sorry I couldn't
To Sally: Sorry I couldn't use correct grammar and punctuations . I'm not the best at that but everyone has their flaws that's the beauty of life(:
To Stephanie: thanks for pointing that out because I was looking for the error after Sally brought it to my attention. I changed it so I hope everyone is happy. I like to thank you for liking my poems regardless of the errors that may occur. I truly appreciate it.
10 15 2010.
You should have "you're", the
You should have "you're", the last sentence in the first paragraph. No one is perfect, you are a good writer, keep on writing.
There is nothing to be sad about, that was a small issue. Don't worry about it, no humans are perfect.
Blessings.