Dandy-Lyon
On the roof top a dandelion grows
It does not even mater if it snows!
Neither wind, nor rain
Can cause her any pain!
Come all boys and girls,
Lets take a breath and blow!
I can promise you this,
it aint even going to bow.
You can huff and puff
but that plant is tuff!
You can do what ever you want,
even get rough!
But be the ware
That plant is rare.
Do what you must,
it wont be enough.
You can trust me on this,
it is not a bluff!
Up there on the roof top,
It needs no care,
Bring her down
And she will loose that blue air.
Its her safety zone,
Out of the cross-hairs.
Never to be seated, Upon her death chair,
Safe and sound in her castle in the air.
10 04 2010.
LOL--I LIKE THIS as it is
LOL--I LIKE THIS as it is lots of fun!!!--I expected to find: Dandilions don't tell no lies; Dandilions will make you wise; Tell me if she laffs or cries; Blow away dandilion....Blow away dandilion!!!....(Dandilion by The Rolling Stones)--This is a cheerful poem and I enjoyed the read for the smooth flowing lines and the good rhymes--This is an EXCELLENT READ....and what more can the reader of poetry hope for?--GOOD WRITING....Cliff
10 13 2010.
It is strange to see a plant
It is strange to see a plant growing on a roof top all by itself. You make the dandelion a symbol of strength here. I like how you describe her, and you make me want to be like her. Wonder what I would look like with "blue hair"? Just kidding, this is a fine poem.