RHYTHM AND RHYME

shadab's picture

the poem you shoud have a perfect rhythm of words and and rhyme

Rules: 

all words shoud rhyme..

few sentence are expectional 

like in 8 lines 2 lines does rhym its okay

Judging: 
The Challenge Creator Will Select The Winner
Ends: 
Mon, 12/31/2012 (All day)
Create Poem: 

Create Challenge Poem

Prize Details: 

you will be getting personal advice from a chetan, a novelist

Username
shadab
umbleets
Judy Williams
Susan Lee
imhotep370
tdiehl27
unclemikey41
ekphill
Erwin408
poeticgurl83
Nourish
akshaya
Cryanburme
DaniLady
Mac80
 

Poetry Challenge Entries

UP

Susan Lee's picture

UP

 

 

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4 users have voted.
 

growing old in never never land

imhotep370's picture

curtains close

one girl from the crowd tosses a rose.

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1 user has voted.
 

TOOLS OF PASSION

ekphill's picture

When it’s awake on me you quake
in the fire of your desire
A device abusive yet allusive
in mind it haunts your endless want

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1 user has voted.
 

life of a butterfly

akshaya's picture

Dancing in the garden of flowers topped with dew
Fluttering spectacle of myriad hues,
Not giving a thought for posterity that’s due
Living a life every moment anew

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1 user has voted.
 

I MISS YOU

shadab's picture

 

I miss you all the time,

And would do a crime,

To get you back in my life,

As a lover or a wife,

 

Its an unsaid boon,

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1 user has voted.
 

Places In Life

umbleets's picture

All around and in between

Upside down and throughout

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Faith

DaniLady's picture

My life starts to suck as it runs down the drain

I'm tied to the tracks and here comes the train

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0 users have voted.
 

Trouble

Judy Williams's picture

Trouble

If it be thy will God
Please make things right
Comfort my loved ones
With warmth through the night

Times are hard lord
Sometimes I cant see
Just what i should do

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1 user has voted.
 

Blinded by Truth

Cryanburme's picture

Looking for the deeper meaning can be so demeaning

Demoralizing what we're polarizing I want to pulverize it

This race to the end

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1 user has voted.
 

Midnight stalkers

Mac80's picture

Bitter by light demonic creatures devour the night
Countless cowards slaughtered like cattle many
Have died in this bloody hour you're only human
With no power so drink your wine eat your bread

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0 users have voted.