Somewhere I Got Lost In You While You Were Inside Me
Our bodies became on to the point where I didn't know where my skin began and ended.
Us and the sheets were blended.
I closed my eyes for the ride and let you inside.
After the moans and groans,
twists and turns,
highs and lows,
and the baby please don't let go,
I let go.
And released.
And released.
And released all that was in me.
All that I am.
Shit I must've came right out of my mind.
My common sense slid from my brain when you slid from in between.
My independence went right out of the door behind you.
I was always behind you.
And instead of saying baby be by my side, you kept me there.
But more importantly I stayed there.
Like a dummy I was your pinnochio, ventrilloquist, and Barbie doll.
And thorugh it all I remained true.
To you and only you.
I tried my damnedest to do the best that I could.
I don't know why because after all the shit wasn't even that good.
See I was young and didn't know any better.
Didn't think I could do any better, but I did.
And baby, it is so much better!
You see he makes my emotions orgasm.
And the panties, he never even had 'em
So from this day forward I vow to never again get lost in a man.
But find my way home in his heart, mind, body, and soul.
-Queen




07 12 2010.
i was trembling wen i
i was trembling wen i finished dis poem..u write so well!
07 12 2010.
Thank u...u have no idea how
Thank u...u have no idea how much that means to me :-)
07 12 2010.
Damn, lol. Deeply sexual.
Damn, lol. Deeply sexual. Nice poem. Glad you found out what it's all about. Lust don't last long.
07 12 2010.
nah not long at all
nah not long at all
07 13 2010.
third line from the end is
third line from the end is the trick long forgotten that becomes the treat to both at the right time...
07 14 2010.
yes i agree...i believe
yes i agree...i believe physical pleasure is an instant gratification that will only last a couple of minutes after the initial act....however...if u experience that pleasure on a emotional and mental level, that feeling can last a lifetime
07 28 2010.
wow i loved this poem
wow i loved this poem beginning to end
Its an amazing piece that tells the truth
between love & lust & i must say u did a great job
pressing the pen to paper with this one
Most Respect-Dominique
07 29 2010.
thank u so much :-)
thank u so much :-)
08 30 2010.
WOW, I am blown backwards by
WOW, I am blown backwards by this poem, it is so eloquently written. I love that this poem deals with something that i believe is all too important, that love is such a more exquisite bond than lust. Thank you for writing this poem. Words can't express how much i love this poem. Thank You for sharing it.
*King Crayton*
08 31 2010.
thanks for the luv, i
thanks for the luv, i appreciate it :-)