A mistake

XxFreeMind's picture

Calling out to you
But you never came
Don't freak out,
I said
It's a common mistake
It doesn't mean a thing.
Broken hearts, broken dreams
Falling tears on red rose cheeks
Why aren't you holding me now?
Such a mistake to bring you into my heart
You took my hand and led me
to thinking you were true
but your always going to be my biggest mistake

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clyde alan's picture
by clyde alan·Jul 11, 2011

NICE WORK.

Solo's picture
by Solo·Jul 11, 2011

lol, it's not funny but I've heard similar before. Nice work though.

XxFreeMind's picture
by XxFreeMind·Jul 11, 2011

well it is like most common heartbroken poems but this is 100% original work.
Thank you @clyde and @solo :)

LaaTraviieesaa19's picture
by LaaTraviieesaa19·Nov 14, 2011

wow uu juhst wrotee maah wholee feelinq