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Cozy

 

Ragged clouds careen across the hostile sky.

Lightning rips and tears at the blowing flurries,

as the thunder crackles and roars above.

Rain lashes across the land and seas.

The trees whip violently back and forth, limbs snapping.

small creatures burrow deep into the earth,

trying to avoid the deluge of rain

 that pours down from the heavens.

The wail of the wind sounds delicious.

Shivers run down my spine as I watch through my window.

I snuggle back into my comfy reading chair.

A log in the fireplace pops as warmth floods over me.

I smile, I turn a page.

Behind The Poem: 

I put this on once and it was deleted.  I love rainstorms.


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Kayla Darling's picture

love the excitement of this

love the excitement of this poem

KinG WeBStaR Da 1ST's picture

Great poem the visual of  the

Great poem the visual of  the poem is amazing.I love storms too especially  the sleep that night.

Keep up the excellent workyesyesangel

 

heartUr God Son

Faith's picture

You paint a lovely image with

You paint a lovely image with your words, I can here the rain and feel the dampness of the weather as the animals scurry under ground. Exceptional work. Sometimes I feel like this when I start a new poem. No matter how loud it gets on the inside or outside of yourself, it alls goes away when you put pencil to paper.

mr mystic's picture

A riveting read, which ends

A riveting read, which ends with the sweet comfort
and safety of home!

poeticsoul22's picture

i loved how you described the

i loved how you described the storm, and how you are when it rains it gives suck a clear comfortable visual, beautiful poem susan

shepard's picture

Great poem,it has so

Great poem,it has so much excitement!

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