A Break Up Can Be Tough

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Submitted by Miller03 on Sat, 08/06/2011 - 7:34pm
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Many parts to my broken heart,
From the day when it all fell apart.
My whole world came crashing down,
But its fell with out a sound.

All the love that you stole,
Left me standing in a hole,
From the day my whole world fell apart,
I’m standing here with a broken heart.

A second that passes feels like an hour,
All my emotions have turned sour,
Feeling all hollow and left alone,
My heart has turned into solid stone.

A broken heart was the death of me,
Its so simple now to see,
Isn’t it better to at least fall,
To than have never loved at all?

Behind The Poem: 

It's true a break up can be tough, or maybe your the one that is breaking up with the other person, in this poem the other person is breaking up with the girl. (Me) yet my mom says I'm too young to even DATE! I haven't dated yet but this is what i think it will end like. if i'm lucky :)


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Submitted by j_weaver10 on Sat, 08/06/2011 - 9:09pm.

I have gone through my fair share of heartache. I'm glad I found the love of my life and married him!