My God

Marie_HW's picture

Believe in what you see they say,

but I beg to differ.

My God is there,

but hidden

and sometimes hard to decipher.

 


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Stickyicky's picture
by Stickyicky·Mar 7, 2012

Nice

 

Marie_HW's picture
by Marie_HW·Mar 26, 2012

thnx)

K. Ann's picture
by K. Ann·Oct 14, 2012

what creative expression of faith.

onyxrose333's picture
by onyxrose333·Oct 15, 2012

have to admit..im not religous at all (no offense to anyone) but this is a very good poem..is short sweet and to the point

umbleets's picture
by umbleets·Oct 15, 2012

Short and sweet

 

Rae Martin Lloren's picture
by Rae Martin Lloren·Oct 15, 2012

Nice work

SNP's picture
by SNP·Oct 15, 2012

Nice. If God wasn't here we wouldn't be here.

DaniLady's picture
by DaniLady·Oct 16, 2012

Yes i agree 100%

 

Dark September Rain's picture
by Dark September Rain·Oct 16, 2012

I like the way you put it, short, but from the heart.

Marie_HW's picture
by Marie_HW·Oct 16, 2012

Thank you all you made my day.

Mduncan's picture
by Mduncan·Oct 17, 2012

gets the point across without making me feel like it is being crammed down my throat. Nice work

canniko's picture
by canniko·Oct 17, 2012

Impressive. 

Phoenix's picture
by Phoenix·Oct 18, 2012

Nice!

Marie_HW's picture
by Marie_HW·Oct 18, 2012

Thank you all so much!!!!!! I really didn't know this poem was going to get all these comments!!! It just shows that you need to put all your poems in that you create, even though you think that it might suck.

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by EagleHawk4ever·Oct 18, 2012

Short but  nice