Dear God

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my mamma

my daddy

There arguing again

i just

cant figure out what went wrong

i sit here in my bed crying again

with no one here to wipe my tears

i wish i had an easier life

yes

i wish i had an easier life

i miss all the times we laughed together

sitting at the piknic table

i miss all the time we would cry together

not just me alone

i wish i had an easier life

yes 

i wish i had an easier life

DEAR GOD,

please make all the screaming stop.

make it how it used to be, 

when we loved each other

but thats not how it is now

this is just too much for me

to much too handle.

GOD

I'm thinking about coming to you early

hope you don't mind

or just make it how it used to be

Mom, Dad, and Me

amen

 

 

 

 

 

Behind The Poem: 

this was once a song me and my mother wrote together. but i changed somethings up


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Sabbeth Angel's picture
by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 5, 2012

i know mom. and it will get better

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by Rythematic123·Mar 5, 2012

No matter what i will stand by your side, And i will do what i can to keep you smiling.

This is a very strong poem. i love it well done SB:)

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

thank you zack

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 5, 2012

thank you so much....

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by mason manning·Mar 5, 2012

of course u know tht when u need me ill be here

 

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 5, 2012

yes i know it

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by mason manning·Mar 5, 2012

well good then

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

well knoe proplem

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by KinG WeBStaR Da 1ST·Mar 5, 2012

well  great poem once again if you need me i am here too  i understand,  thats what friends are 4.2 help through hard times and if that don't work that is what poetry and poems are for to help release anger and emotions etc.

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

thank you so very much you are amazing.

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

ok thank you so very much!!!!!!!! you are all amazing too!!!!!!!!!

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

This poem mean alot to me and my mom. i still sing the song in the shower sometimes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!blush

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

well i really do love it cuz it makes me feel like i can be free

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

that is so good i hope you like all my poems. this one is very close to my heart

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

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hahahaha inside joke right sabbeth

 

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

hahahahahahahah you crake me up. and shhhhh that is a secret!!!!!!! `1234567890-\a

oh and you forgot the dash and a

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

ok wow im sry about that

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

lol

 

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

haha your a dumb ass lol

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

ass hole lol jking love ya

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

awwwwww you so sweeet

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by marshal09·Mar 8, 2012

and ur so cute

 

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 8, 2012

awwww well thank you

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by marshal09·Mar 9, 2012

u no life is like a party live free

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 9, 2012

yes cause im Young, Wild and Free 

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by marshal09·Mar 9, 2012

hahaha so role one smoke we just haven fun

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 9, 2012

so what we get drunk

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by marshal09·Mar 9, 2012

so wat we smoke weed

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 9, 2012

we just haven fun

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by marshal09·Mar 9, 2012

mine and ur song forever

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 9, 2012

You got that right!!!!!!! hahahaha

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by mason manning·Mar 9, 2012

lol

 

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by Sabbeth Angel·Mar 9, 2012

His name is derek he sits by me in school he is a long good friend of mine

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by mason manning·Mar 10, 2012

thts cool

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by Queen Angel Da 1st·Mar 27, 2012

lol meeeeeeeeeeeee.