I Stand Here Today
Even though everyday is a battle wage
because of the decisions she haves to make
trying her best not to lose
as the many paths she choose
but deep within her heart she knows
that god is putting her to the test
god also tells her not to give up and quit
because the outcomes of her life is beyond her beliefs
but in her mind she's desperatly wants to achieve
so in his mercy and love is to hope and believe
the chances she takes and the lessons she learn
she knows that there is somthing great that be accomplished




01 06 2011.
ShaSha, this is a great poem
ShaSha, this is a great poem and my opinion, it would be more powerful...if it was expressed in a general statement. But as a writer, I do understand the intemacy and love for one's true expression. Great job.