Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow

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Will You Still Love Me Tomorrow
By: Adam M. Snow

My heart does not ache
With every love I take.
Your voice over-shadows
My lame. I repose,
Despite your treachery
Of our love contrary;
Living our unholy masquerade,
Afraid and betrayed.
Your voice does linger still,
Though it be your will;
With every breath I speak,
Though I'm lame and weak-
I speak with my sorrow:
"Will you still love me tomorrow?"


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by clyde alan·Aug 20, 2011

the phrasing is nice,the context is precise and descriptive,very strong.

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by artistic95·Aug 21, 2011

The words and the picture you chose mix really well. I agree that this poem is very strong with the choice of words.