I Bet
I bet you'd think I'm stupid.
I bet you wouldn't understand.
I bet that you would tell me
to get over it.
I bet you don't see how you push me away.
I bet you don't know what it is,
that makes me want to stay.
I bet I won't get over it.
I bet I'll always care.
I bet when I see you over there,
I'll always stop to stare.
Behind The Poem:
first off, I wanted to see if I could rhyme in a poem and make it seem like I wasn't trying. the first stanza, I was talking about telling one of my friends something that rlly hurt. In the second and third ones, I'm talking to the guy that hurt me in the first place. Any Feedback Welcomed
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10 19 2011.
thats amazing you're really
thats amazing you're really talented
10 19 2011.
*bighug* Whoever hurt you, I
*bighug* Whoever hurt you, I hope they realize it hurt like this. I really, REALLY like the last stanza, and I think everyone has felt like that at one point or another in their life.
10 19 2011.
I hope they realize, too.
I hope they realize, too.
10 19 2011.
I hate to hear how u feel
I hate to hear how u feel about that
I can't see the action
but I feel the pain
deep down my heart
& I hope that u find a better one sooner
a one that deserved u, a one that understand
a one that think before he acts
a one that love u so much
& offer u to put a ring up ur finger for life.
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