Innocent Blood

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Submitted by letswritelovee_ on Sat, 09/07/2013 - 8:16pm
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closes her eyes ,
while she tears herself apart,
this is innocent blood,
dripping on the floor...

she turns to her only friend,
the only one who touches her,
who feels and heals her,
and watches the innocent blood fall...

"criticize criticize criticize",
while the tears from her eyes,
burn through her skin,
"criticize, criticize, criticize",
while the scars on her skin,
reminds her of them..

baby you should.let go,
let go of your "friend",
I promise there is something better on the other end...

But this innocent blood,
Feels so good on your skin,
Oh this innocent blood,
Screams that you are alive,
Tonight...

So you take your pretty hand,
And you make your little slice,
Waiting to end the night,
Trying to find a better life,
Wanting to escape,
But you can't even sleep at night...

But these innocent scars,
Will take you somewhere,
When you stop feeding off of this innocent blood...

Behind The Poem: 

I read this book & this girl committed suicide because of the way people treated hee they made he feel like she didnt have a reason to live.. and thats what made me write this


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SNP's picture
Submitted by SNP on Tue, 09/10/2013 - 10:39am.

graphic poem, down feelings can make you think of suicide  

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Submitted by MrMayaAngelou on Wed, 09/11/2013 - 6:44pm.

I Like. NIce Poem. :)

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Submitted by letswritelovee_ on Mon, 10/07/2013 - 10:40am.

Thank u (:

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Wed, 09/25/2013 - 2:09am.

graphic but deep expressions of pain in this piece, its never a good feeling to be in that place...wonderful write, look forward to reading more from you

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Submitted by letswritelovee_ on Mon, 10/07/2013 - 10:41am.

Thanksss:)

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Submitted by K. Ann on Thu, 10/03/2013 - 11:13am.

Great poem!  It's so sad that people are treated so badly that they feel death is there only way out.  Shame on the bullies!!!!

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Submitted by letswritelovee_ on Mon, 10/07/2013 - 10:42am.

I AGREE. thank u(:

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Submitted by Juana Feliciano on Wed, 10/16/2013 - 7:44pm.

baby you should.let go,

let go of your "friend",

I promise there is something better on the other end...

Your a good friend