The Real Me

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Thu, 01/31/2013 - 11:43pm
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I find my wondering an endless darkness,
of my mind, lost within myself.
A sense of every feeling to heartless,
with multiple presence felt.
Mirrors come out from everywhere,
my reflection clear in all.
These copies start to remove their,
bodies from the glass prison and fall.
They stand before me,
a copy but so very different.
It took a moment to see,
multiple personalities reflected at one moment.
A me for every feeling and emotion,
all fighting the title of being real.
And amidst all this commotion,
I lose my patience to deal.
I now find my self faceless,
in front of these generic copies.
And am at one of my most confusing cases,
of figuring out which is the real me.
 

Behind The Poem: 

Sometimes you lose yourself and don't know who you are anymore, feel me...Respect


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Jewele H's picture
Submitted by Jewele H on Fri, 02/01/2013 - 1:17am.

Idk why you don't think your poems aren't good, they really are. I like this 

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Fri, 02/01/2013 - 11:27am.

thanks for the comment, i'm glad you liked it...my poems pretty average i guess

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Submitted by Lucid_Mind on Fri, 02/01/2013 - 5:57pm.

This write had multiple dimensions. I think we all have many sides to ourselves and can get lost in who the real "me" is. The hardest part is harnessing all these personas you have within in yourself. Very relatable piece.

It's good to see great writing 

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Sat, 02/02/2013 - 12:01am.

thanks for the comment, it really is easy to get lost in different personalities...glad you could relate

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Submitted by Adele W on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 4:12pm.

Very powerful piece!!  You did a great job!!:-)

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 11:10pm.

thanks for the comment...im glad you liked it, and I appreciate the support  

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Submitted by Nathan A. Carr on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 10:50pm.

It isnt a bad piece,  i think you have a talent you can work with.

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 11:14pm.

thanks for the comment...i really appreciate it

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Submitted by lastingerstung on Mon, 02/04/2013 - 5:21am.

They are you and you are them and all of them makes up who you are...Great Write don't try to find which one you are just except each one as a part of you.Then you can make yourself even better than you were...

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Submitted by Larry_Skyllz on Mon, 02/04/2013 - 12:50pm.

thanks for the comment n advice...glad you liked it