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Submitted by MzEllaD on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 3:12pm
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What do I do when I’m torn in two
My heart says one thing
But my mind says another
My mind is saying
Let it go
Forget it 
That's the past
My heart is telling me to hold on because we aren’t over yet.
Forget the pain
Wipe away the tears.
We’ve been together this long and dealt with too much.
Don’t just give up now
Feel that I’m going insane.
Because my heart’s been tortured
My heart’s been broken time and time again by you.
And still it feels like your worth holding on to.
My mind is saying let go
But my heart is saying hold on just a little bit longer
I don’t know what to do
Because I’m completely torn in two

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Submitted by BilleeLovesReagan on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 5:16pm.

Thats awesome!

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Submitted by MzEllaD on Wed, 01/30/2013 - 5:26pm.

Thank U

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Submitted by Lucid_Mind on Fri, 02/01/2013 - 6:35pm.

I like this, its a great example of when your heart and mind conflict. especially when what you are holding onto is not good for you.

Great write

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Submitted by MzEllaD on Sat, 02/02/2013 - 12:16am.

Thank You so much for reading my poem and your feedback

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Submitted by MzEllaD on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 1:50pm.

Thank U for your feedback

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Submitted by Adele W on Sun, 02/03/2013 - 6:16pm.

Can't get no more deeper from the heart and soul than this!!  This is some Fierce work of art sistah!!  You go girl!!  I love this piece!!:-)