You Ask
You Ask
Is it but a feeble notion
to seek in prayer
the want of our dreams
the heavens open
as in secret we stare
upon a kingdom's lair
As sensitive species
the human race
in eagles flight, ready to soar
with eyes to the stars
hearts surface with scars of
subconscious language, liken
the dungeon's darkening mire
the lighthouse emitting hope
the lion's bellowing uproar
Which is your choice
choose carefully
what you choose
becomes your voice
becomes your prayer
every minute every hour
allow hope, be released
timeless, deciduous willow
as you beautifully flower
(c)2009; jmk published at Poets Expression
Is it but a feeble notion
to seek in prayer
the want of our dreams
the heavens open
as in secret we stare
upon a kingdom's lair
As sensitive species
the human race
in eagles flight, ready to soar
with eyes to the stars
hearts surface with scars of
subconscious language, liken
the dungeon's darkening mire
the lighthouse emitting hope
the lion's bellowing uproar
Which is your choice
choose carefully
what you choose
becomes your voice
becomes your prayer
every minute every hour
allow hope, be released
timeless, deciduous willow
as you beautifully flower
(c)2009; jmk published at Poets Expression
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Comment by Lehua on September 26, 2009 at 5:48pm - Thank you Gabe and Christina for your encouraging comments.
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Comment by christina on September 26, 2009 at 11:27am -
THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVS
UR REAL GOOD
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Comment by Gabe on September 23, 2009 at 4:09pm - nicely done:)
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Comment by Lehua on September 23, 2009 at 8:28am
- Joseph ~ I absolutely agree with you
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Comment by Joseph J. Breunig 3rd on September 23, 2009 at 8:20am
- An enjoyable piece; however, to be effective, our prayers must be aligned with The Word. --Joe
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Comment by Lehua on September 23, 2009 at 12:29am
- Thank you friends for you comments of encouragment
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Comment by chinka on September 23, 2009 at 12:24am - awesome!
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Comment by DoMiNiQu3 on September 23, 2009 at 12:15am -
beautifully done
I really liked this peice
Most Respect-Dominique
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Comment by Christopher Allen Wallach on September 23, 2009 at 12:14am - nice poem i likes it you have a vast choice of words
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Comment by Eli Anderson on September 22, 2009 at 11:56pm - i enjoyed this a lot. you have quite a way with words, and the imagery i get in my head is fantastic. Good job!
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