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Your Silence

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It was your silence that seduced me,
the silence of your gestures and your smiles,
the silence of your wide eyes and parted lips
gazing at me.
And in the silence where beauty once concealed
could no longer be heard,
the silence of your words
caused me to go astray

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I like it :)

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I like it too
It reminds me of a secret love C:

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This is wonderful, its nice that someone can capture someones beauty without using blunt descriptions, i imagine reading this aloud and its silent and every word has its own special personal memory for you.

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Very good.Speaks of a lack of communication.Well done.

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Hmm this is interesting indeed, many, many ways to interpret it and deep meaning to it, I applaud you.

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Hi,

This reminds me of a principal rule of some relationships.  The same thing that draws many people together is the very thing that tears them apart.  Short and succinct.


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