From The BOTTOM Of My Heart

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I Felt
Real Loneliness That
I Wanted To Forget
You In My Life
Thinking
Maybe It Is The Right Way

Leave Me
You should Never
Love Me
Maybe You Should
Forget Me
Never Ever
Come Near Me

Say Goodbye
Please Do Not
Let Me Cry
Do Not
Try To Touch Me
Please

Go Away
Do Not
Talk To Me
Now Is The Time To
Walk Away
Do Not Ever
Try To Love Me

Pls. try to read the poem from TOP to BOTTOM then
from BOTTOM to TOP....comment pls....

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richa's picture
by richa·Jul 14, 2010

omg....dis is such a wonderful poem...i just loved it from top to bottom and bottom to top,,,
beautiful...beautiful...

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by SUN TZU·Jul 14, 2010

this poem is so interesting.... I loved it.

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by Rae Martin Lloren·Jul 15, 2010

Thank You for your COMMENT the_unhappy_soul, this poem is dedicated to all of you who love it...XD

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by Unoqiirl·Jul 19, 2010

I LOVE THIS!
This is SO how I feel right now.
When you read the poem from top to bottom, it says one thing & when you read it from bottom to top, it means another thing. It's like an underlying message. I LOVE IT!
This is an interesting way of writing && it's done well.
<3 this poem.

~S

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by Rae Martin Lloren·Jul 19, 2010

Dear Unoqiirl,

Thank you so much for appreciating my poem..

I hope that you will comment also to my other poems!!!

More Power nd GODBLESS!

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by BreannaN.·Oct 3, 2010

Beautiful

Scoby Jones's picture
by Scoby Jones·Oct 3, 2010

this is one of the best poems I've ever read
great job

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by Rae Martin Lloren·Oct 13, 2010

thank you scoby jones!

a simple poem but has a two meaningful message

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by Rae Martin Lloren·Oct 13, 2010

thank you scoby jones!

a simple poem but has a two meaningful messages

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by Stephanie McKenzie·Oct 4, 2010

This is creative, interesting, and absolute wonderful. Well done!

Blessings,
McKenzie.