If I were that type of girl

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You know those girls who fall head over heels, who wear their hearts on their sleeves.

The ones who walk around with a smile like its holding in a secret; the smile never fading, sworn to always keep it.

Those girls with a daze in their eyes, no one knows what's going through their mind

But that faraway look tells us who's on it.

I've never been one of them, but if I were that type of girl I'd melt at every word that escaped from your mouth

Your lips, like piano keys, creating melodies with every movement

I'd kiss those lips, sending music through my body; sounds so beautiful that my heart begins to dance

I'd do everything I could to keep my heart in my chest at the moments you held me closest

Our bodies like millions of grains of sand, collapsing into each other, molding into one another, fitting perfectly we become one.

I'd close my eyes, running my hands over your skin, until I've memorized even the swirls of the letters that make up your tattoos

My fingers speaking love into every inch of your skin; you hear the depth of my affection with every touch

I've never been one of them, but if I were that type of girl I wouldn't tell you I love you.

I'd leap the gaps left behind by powerful earthquakes, escaping the fiery pits of this world we call home

I'd blow back hurricanes, exhaling with such a force that they diminish in an instant

I'd wrestle tornadoes, throwing them out of my way so I could make my way back to you

I'd let us fall from the stars just so we could climb back up, leaving the serenity of the sky to rediscover our love again and again.

I'd do all of these things twice over to prove you my love, but I swear I'm not that type of girl.

Behind The Poem: 

This needs a bit of editing.. but what the hayy! First love <3 (:


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j_weaver10's picture
by j_weaver10·Aug 29, 2011

It is so amazing what we will do for love! Great poem and writing skills =)

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by Missinadequate·Aug 29, 2011

It is very amazingg, and thank you so muchh (:

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by KalebJ·Aug 29, 2011

Impressed I am.

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by drheude·Aug 29, 2011

it beautiful

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by Missinadequate·Aug 30, 2011

Thank you both so much (:

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by angelabella·Aug 30, 2011

Wow.....It's nice....If I were that type of girl...but I swear I'm not that type of girl....it's cutesy.

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by Missinadequate·Aug 30, 2011

thank youuu (:

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by A nobodys words·Sep 10, 2011

that is so nice you can really write

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by Missinadequate·Sep 11, 2011

thankss (:

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by NeNe·Sep 10, 2011

In my most humble opinion, it doesn't need any editing. It's perfect as is. I think it's breathtakingly awesome!

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by Missinadequate·Sep 11, 2011

thank you so muchhh (:

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by LindyWindy·Sep 18, 2011

I agree! it's beautiful, one of my new favorites! don't you dare change anything about it, or I will hunt you down and kill you in your sleep!

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by Missinadequate·Sep 19, 2011

Lmaoo Thanks so much

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by Chaotica·Oct 13, 2011

love it

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by Missinadequate·Oct 13, 2011

Thank youu!

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by shyviolet_96·Nov 5, 2011

Love it!! It's perfect how it is =)

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by Missinadequate·Nov 6, 2011

Thank youuu (:

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by NigelPower22·Nov 23, 2011

Wicked poem

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by Missinadequate·Nov 26, 2011

Thanks!!

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by daniellaella·Dec 23, 2011

this is a beautiful poem and it automatically reminds you of how powerful love can be...especially from a womans point of view. It's difficult not to be blown away like the imagery you used...but it's not always the safest thing to let the man know all these secret thoughts:) I definitely felt this poem:)

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by Missinadequate·Dec 23, 2011

Thank you, this really means so much! I'm really glad you enjoyed it.

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by Darwin Jr·Apr 16, 2012

sick imiagery 

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by Missinadequate·Apr 24, 2012

Thank you!