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"Ingredients of happiness"

NEW..."Ingredients of happiness" (My project for the 5th graders)....
by Heather Bolden on Tuesday, October 25, 2011 at 10:01am

"Ingredients of happiness"

Big smile, little dimples

Simple joys

Make noise, giggles

Work of art inside your heart

Sentiments far and wide

Bright eyed, surprise

Sprinkled with delight

Excitement at first sight

Fall down laughing

Whichever, big or small

Whomever, boys and girls

Forever happy-go-lucky in your voice

Recipe in the making

Baking happiness within

With this rolling pin

One of the best recipes of life

To give, and to be received

Roll up your sleeves

Complete it with love, for all to see

By me © Heather Bolden 2011

Behind The Poem: 
My son's teacher has asked me to come and speak to the class about writing, and to share a poem... I am writing two! They are 5th graders... PLEASE tell me what you think.thanks :)

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aj60scnat's picture

this is a great poem! made me

this is a great poem! made me think of my little girl! and that just made me smile :)

zannychic2002's picture

Aww ...Thank you so much

Aww ...Thank you so much aj60scnat!!

Tommy Chesterfield's picture

I heart it for real, and

I heart it for real, and great for 5th graders. I think you nailed it. Are you going to be doing a writers workshop with them? If you need any help feel free to email me at tommychesterfield@yahoo.com

Hope _Love's picture

the kids will love it .I love

the kids will love it .I love it its just the motivation I needed!!!!!!!!!!!!

zannychic2002's picture

Tommy.. Thank you!! I'm

Tommy.. Thank you!! I'm getting up with the teacher this Thurs, not sure what will come of it...but I know for sure that my son is SUPER excited that I am going to read it to the class.Thanks again :)

Tommy Chesterfield's picture

You're welcome!

You're welcome!

zannychic2002's picture

Hope_Love... Thank you so

Hope_Love... Thank you so much for your feed back!! It is greatly appreciated :D

Zee4's picture

the 5th graers will love it.

the 5th graers will love it. its a wonderful poem :) im glad i read it

zannychic2002's picture

Hey there Zee! Thank you

Hey there Zee! Thank you lot's!!

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