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How do you build someone up just to watch them fall? How do you care one day, then the next not at all? Like a beautiful masterpiece of art all shimmery and glaze, you crumpled me up like a worthless piece of paper and threw me away. I hesitated when i first met you, I promised myself you weren't the same, but you broke me down and turned into a pathetic monster who played the same game. - Tanika Marie Crawford

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dying breed's picture
by dying breed·Jan 15, 2013

this is good, i think you could have put more thought into it, made it a little more lengthy. i started reading and understood your pain but it dissolved quickly cause it was just too short.

thanks for sharing :)

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by Nikkaneak·Jan 15, 2013

Yes this is just a start, this is why I put it into a quote. I do plan on adding more but thankyou for reading :) means alot.

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by theSoulist·Jan 15, 2013

I enjoyed it and your wordplay was beautiful with this one and I can actually feel your pain, good job, read my newest poem "Just Business" whenever you get a chance though :) I'll keep a eye on your future poems though :)

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by SNP·Jan 15, 2013

Nice piece full of emotion. People can switch up on you so quick in this world that it's easy to get let down and the more it happens, the more it might hurt. Keep expressing yourself!