Water

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Life is like water.

Water is life.

No water no life...

 

Water takes any shape you pour it in

Water adapts to any kind of situation.

Water can be cruel, water can be soothing.

 

Water can give life and can take life.

Water hides, water uncovers.

 

Just like in the shower

When you let ice cold water stream over your spine

You can feel your lungs swell, sucking all the oxygen out of the room

Like you're being born again..

 

Isn't it wonderful.. the way water can be

They way life can be...

 

At first it might seem cold and harsh

and after you take that breath of life

you adapt and take shape...

 

People can be

 

like water

Behind The Poem: 

My first try at non- sad poetry.

 


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Susan Lee's picture
by Susan Lee·Aug 17, 2012

Deep and insightful.  so thoughtprovoking