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Im intrinsically intricate

impossible to be impotent

potential to articulate

with incapabilites to capitulate

Capitalize on capital

a free ranging spirit, I catch it all

a commoner's misconception's

my common appearance's perception

I'm perceptive beyond belief

but no one sees my motif

I come around and around

and yet im nowhere to be found

confusing to you, am i?

I'm addicted to the game I

am a series of miracles

and im disquietingly lyrical

A multifaceted personality

with only one face actually;

I'm slow but steady in a race

so I'll always beat out the chase

and i'm a chameleon out of my habitat but i'm never out of place

My name's King Crayton

and keep my tracks unlaced

Behind The Poem: 

It shows how difficult to understand I am. Comment if you understood it, and if you didn't, you should still comment :D. I want to know if i did my job right.


Any Feedback Welcomed

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ExpressedWordz's picture

That was dope, I am def

That was dope, I am def feeling this right here, real Urban poetry.  Reminds me of NaS or Lupe Fiasco and that’s what I like….great job, keep it up!!

King Crayton's picture

Thanks man. I was just

Thanks man. I was just listenin to Lupe like 15 minutes before i wrote that too. Thats hot that you think thats who i sound like.

ExpressedWordz's picture

Yeah man no doubt!

Yeah man no doubt! That’s what its all about…real writing, real rappin’…its all about the art of spoken word and I can def relate to this because I am with it!!!

poet_in_motion's picture

Very nice delivery, love the

Very nice delivery, love the vocab used. Tight rhythm and flow. : 

 

I'm perceptive beyond belief

but no one sees my motif

I come around and around

and yet im nowhere to be found

Love these lines

Well done

King Crayton's picture

Thank you. As the title

Thank you. As the title suggested, the wordplay and vocabulary meant a lot to me in the poem. I'm glad you enjoyed it

Zee4's picture

right as right can be,

right as right can be, awesome job.

King Crayton's picture

Thank you :)

Thank you :)

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