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She once told me............

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i never thought i would feel like this

like i should die

i love my life

but I'm sick of all the lies

She once told me

that i wont go to heaven when i die

Then i replied

No, but i wont burn in hell

hell is to good for me

to good a place

i will suffer

far more than you will see

She once told me

there are only heaven and hell

if you don't go there

then were?

Then i replied

i will be no were

just a distant memory

She once told me

babe girl

if you leave

i will too

i cant live my life knowing

that your death 

was my fault

Then I replied

mother

this is no ones fault

but mine

i don't belong in this world

i don't belong in this life

i choose the start over

start from scratch

i promise to remember you

and your love

for when i die

just look in the sky

and you will know

that i have gone

gone to a better time

She once told me

i love you 

more

than you will ever know

Then i replied

........

.......

......

....

...

nothing

 

 

 

 

Behind The Poem: 

This is a conversation me and my real mother had once, after i told her i wish i would die, but i revised it a little bit, also at the end of the poem i die, but it is apperent i diddnt really kill myself, hope yall like 


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lonely_Woman2123's picture

Wow i love this girly.....its

Wow i love this girly.....its really good!!!!!

na898810's picture

Love it!!!

Love it!!!

mason manning's picture

omg mezmerizing

omg mezmerizing

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