Goin Fast

Submitted by SNP on Mon, 01/30/2012 - 7:17pm |

I like to go fast real fast

So I gotta slow myself down so I won’t crash

Adrenaline pumping plot to crush my past

Just a life full of lustful things that I didn’t have

Like the finest girl, bigger rims and much cash

So my fam could live above below average living I never had

Cold winters kitchen stove burners kept my body position warmer

Picture living in a hot summer

Wishing for a hot supper

So when I brought my first bucket

I took off like no other brotha

Now I think fast 26 with a mass full of gas

I consider myself the last hope from my dad that is dead

Behind The Poem:

It seems like my thoughts are always moving faster than reality so sometimes I have to slow myself down. That's what this poem is about.

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lulu
01 30 2012.

i love this poem and think

i love this poem and think its amazing <3 :)

SNP
01 30 2012.

thank you, your feedback is

thank you, your feedback is amazing

Latisha
01 30 2012.

I'm truly feeling it. I can

I'm truly feeling it. I can relate to your poem,and the reason behind it.Many of us have racing thoughts some good for the better, some bad for whatever. You are very good real talk

SNP
01 30 2012.

I must agree,I was reading

I must agree,I was reading your speedometer.lol Your poem is so true and well written.You are a great poet!Keep it real always..

SNP
01 30 2012.

Thanks for reading and for

Thanks for reading and for the motivation.

poet_in_motion
01 30 2012.

Love the movement in this piece. Yeah, sometimes our thoughts move in HD but reality may be like a black and white movie:) Nice piece here. I love how you began this and the following lines I really like as I could personally relate to some of this:

So my fam could live above below average living I never had

Cold winters kitchen stove burners kept my body position warmer

Picture living in a hot summer

Wishing for a hot supper

So when I brought my first bucket

I took off like no other brotha

Excellent expression, spoken word piece here...

Keep penning!