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IM SO HURT AND CONFUSED LOST MYSELF IN THE FOUNTAIN OF

CONFUSION  AND AS I LAY MY HEAD DOWN AT NIGHT TEARS TRICKLED

DOWN MY FACE, MY HEART IS WEIGHED DOWN WITH GRIEF AND HURT.

IM CONFUSED I THOUGHT THERE WAS GOOD PEOPLE IN THE WORLD BUT

YOU HAVE CRUEL HEARTLESS PEOPLE THAT CARES ABOUT NOTHING

BUT THEMSELVES AND THAT IS NOTHING BUT SELFISHNESS AND IT

HURTS LOOKING BACK IN THE MIRROR OF CONFUSION AND LOOK AT THE

PUDDLE OF  TEARS  AND ALL I SEE IS HURT NO PEACE JUST HURT AND I

FEEL ALL ALONE THESE TEARDROPS OF MINE I SHED, BECAUSE MY

HEART, MY SPRIT IS IN A BALL OF CONFUSION WHY DOES MY HEART

FEELS HEAVY AND LOW WHY PEOPLE CARE ABOUT NOTHING

 

WHY DOES MY HEART FEEL LIKE IS WEIGHTED DOWN BY CONCRETE

ITS HARD FOR ME TO MOVE ITS HARD FOR ME BREATHE  AND I GET

TIRED OH LORD I GET TIRED SOMETIMES IT HARD TO MOVE  IT FEELS

LIKE IM CHOKING AND NOT RECIEVING LIFE  CANT BREATHE PLEASE SAVE ME

Behind The Poem: 

IT REALLY HURTS ME WHEN I LOOK AROUND NOBODY CARES ABOUT NOTHING

ONLY THEIR SELVES THAT A BAD WAY TO BE MY HEART FEELS LIKE ITS HEAVY

SHACKLED DOWN  AND ITS HARD FOR ME TO MOVE CRYING BECAUSE MY HEART IS

HEAVY AND THAT IS SAD BECAUSE LIFE IS SHORT AND ALL I SEE IS SELFNESS AND

THAT IS A REAL BAD TRAIT TO HAVE

Comments

V-C-L's picture

Wow, its sounds like you are

Wow, its sounds like you are in allot of pain. From this poem, i can you are one of few people on this earth that have compassion for their fellow man. If more people read this poem, they would take away a very important lesson. We have to start looking out for each other, instead of just ourselves.. God bless - William L. Wright

V-C-L's picture

Oh and keep writing no matter

Oh and keep writing no matter what.

Dark angel 46's picture

this is really  brillant poem

this is really  brillant poem it really caputrues your true feelings and even though ur in pain and confused keep writing

 

Susan Lee's picture

Keep looking, there are many

Keep looking, there are many good people out there. Never give up, and keep writing.

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