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Desperation takes hold,

as I watch my blood unfold.

Peace washes me clean,

as you remain unseen.

You're never there when I need you,

you're always late to save the day.

But as I look at my bloody arm.

Everything just fades away.

My smile hides my tears.

My laughter hides my screams.

But you look away,

as everything rips from the seams.

You said you'd be there,

but is that really true?

I can't call on you for anything.

But my friends are so few.

Please please just this once,

save the day.

But you don't, you won't,

and here lies my grave.

 

Behind The Poem: 

Just going through a down day.


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na898810's picture

I'm here for you if you need

I'm here for you if you need anything or just want to talk!

Phoenix Shavar's picture

I love this poem!!! youre a

I love this poem!!! youre a good poet!!

Marie_HW's picture

Thank u ever much!

Thank u ever much!

Tannesha_T.'s picture

Your are a good poet that

Your are a good poet that expresses yourself well.Whatever you are going through it will get better..

Marie_HW's picture

Thnks its just been a down

Thnks its just been a down day I have them time to time just more than the usual person has I'm used to it:)

Danielx10doq's picture

:( sad unique poem

:( sad unique poem

Marie_HW's picture

Thnx)

Thnx)

Danielx10doq's picture

I commented back and if you

I commented back and if you read it again! Lol it explains him lying to you only telling you what you want to hear, and when alone he speaks the truth ..

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