Borrow My Eyes For A Day pt1

Submitted by King on Fri, 02/03/2012 - 4:24am |

“Borrow my eyes for a day”

She said, she said, she said, uh!
She said, she said, she said she said, she said
She said I wish you could borrow my eyes for a day
you would see tears fall and want to stray

dreams of a RnB show
sold my ass, and now my titties are up for show
baby starving so i hit the pole
save that baby god loves you shit

his father died from a stray bullet
cops don't care who pulled it
the streets are a, slippery slope played by
Beethoven's notes

sorry King I ain't trying hear a quote
I thought you were different
til you ask me to deep throat
don't worry i can see the clear picture

how can you
see me as a sister when I be a stripper
guess you can't handcuff a hoe right
your words are so power they effect my life

everything you say best believe I hang on to
but your so caught up in the world that it changed you
take your own advice mother fucker and change you
borrow my eyes for a day n' you'll cry too
I wasn't lying when I said that I loved you
so I slept with you and your whole crew

Behind The Poem:

True life experience

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jorlisha
04 05 2012.

WOW IS WHAT I CAN SAY TO THAT

WOW IS WHAT I CAN SAY TO THAT AND SHOCKING I WOULD LOVE TO KNOW WHAT WAS GOING THRO YOUR MIND WHEN YOU WROTE THIS BRO WHOA .........

I CAN SEE ONES PAIN

BUT THAT WAS INSANE

I CAN HOPE FOR YOUR ANSWER BUT PLEASE NOT IN STREY

I JUST WANTED TO KNOW WHAT WAS UP THAT DAY

I LIKE IN A WAY

BUT IT'S JUST NOT MY SMILE

BUT GLAD TO SUPPORT YOU BY EVERY MILE

NICE WORK EVEN THO A SHOCK

I KNOW YOUR PROBALLY A TOUGH ONE TO GET TROUGH TO

SOLID AS A ROCK .

King
04 07 2012.

sorry for the delayed

sorry for the delayed response

em what was going through my head when i wrote this was tryna get the story out as poetically as i could.

certain parts of the story is fabricated but for the most part a lot of what I am saying in this poem is true.

i don't know what goes through my mind when i write I just write

jorlisha
04 11 2012.

oh snap well it was good but

oh snap well it was good but shocking as hec lol i was like ok ima read this i love the title big shocker and nice who knows whats going thro our minds half the time but nice ...... (lelioephant).......... strong wise

King
04 11 2012.

thank you but what does

thank you but what does lelioephant mean?

jorlisha
05 01 2012.

my bad umm i have been on and

my bad umm i have been on and off of here and it stands for who or what i see my self as so far it means the mayne of a lion and the strength of an elephant in one even tho an elephant is big they are weak when alone or just one standing away from the rest they sometimes get lost but always find there way back and a lion has pride as the king of the pack should but i see my self above none so thats me a (leliophant) sorry about that late message .... have a nice day