The Pain

Submitted by Royal Idiot da 1st on Mon, 02/20/2012 - 3:56pm |

18 year old girl...

black hair, brown eyes...not perfect

hiding herself from the world

her mode is in depression... putting herself down

not getting back up

theres no-one there to help her

and only a few try

at night she thinking of how to say goodbye

but shes glad he even said hi

who knew hed be her best friend

hoping thats one thing that doesnt end

now they say shes a goodgirlgonebad

because of the life shes had

the mistakes and pain shes gone through

nobody knows her life

yeah they know what she tells them

trying to put a smile on her face everyday

everyday tends to be a struggle for her

thinking shes not beautiful or pritty

almost everybody in her life thinks

shes a little whore

just because the guys come looking for it

doesnt mean she gives it to them

she wishes that they could just take the time

to see the real her...

get to know who she really is

cuz before you know it, she could end up...

DEAD!!!!

Behind The Poem:

I know everyone knows who this is about and i hope you like this poem for not just the meaning but for how it was written :))

Any Feedback Welcomed

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Royal Idiot da 1st
02 28 2012.

your ,not only talented, but skilled, and honest in your pieces, the conveyance of emotions is likened to different hearts, two yet one torn, one seeker of oblivion, Duality of man, dichotomy of human chaos, this has been invoked in my clouded lens of a mind. Your words seem that they will fall drowning in seas of everdark taking me to battle mine own self, then once again, only if you blink for just one moment in this phantasm of linear illusion called reality, quite the shared delusion influenced and subjected to majority opinion, for human nature is a very dark cruel terrified beast, yet also a chance for something more is there, something pure and right, either tormenting you or inviting you to marvel, in my case both.Your composition this is my best explanation of what it spoke to me, tears on the inside of the screen, tears felt upon my fingertips as I type a crude response, again well done.

-The Nefarious Doctor Jones777

Royal Idiot da 1st
04 19 2012.