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  One day, I will
 
One day I will ask her 
to list the names of the things
that I have done for her
leaving a name between each thing.
 
I will ask her to tell me
or to write the 10 nicest things
that I have done for her
so she could say each thing or write it down.
 
I will take the remainder list of time 
in  order for her to finish their 10 things
without copy and as she's done
then I will take the list and compare them two.
 
In another list I will have all the 10 things 
that I have done for her for the past year
I will write down the name of the 10 things  
that I've done for her separately in a sheet of paper.
 
I will list what she have say in her paper
then I will give her both sheet papers & list
before long, for me to see what she is gonna say
if she's gonna be smiling or not or saying 'Really?'
 
                          Richelet Etienne.
Behind The Poem: 

Behind this poem is what I want to ask any selfish person. & if you anybody that know me, think that I've been selfish, you should ask me that to.


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