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Immortal Memories

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Many times I have tried

to forget you and move on,

but by mind has refused to

let go of your melodious beauty

 

When I close my eyes in the white

sands near the ocean, I see you

walking barefoot and gracefully

in the tropical breeze

 

When I go to meditate in the garden,

I see you resting on clean, green grass

with a red rose decorating your beautiful,

long hair

 

When I look up in the sky,

 I see a cloud imitating your perfect,

slender face, and the cloud-face

appearing as though it's staring at me

 

When I look at your picture,

I feel your gentle heart-beat,

though you are far away

 

The more I try to erase memories

of you, the more intense

beautiful memories of you fly back

to me, like a boomerang!

Behind The Poem: 

There is a girl that I try to fade my memories away from, but they seem not to fade away. I just wrote this poem questioning whether the memories have a romantic future for me or not.


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poet_in_motion's picture

This is heartfelt. You can

This is heartfelt. You can feel the emotion and I do like the imagery presented in your verse. Well done, poet

Teddy's picture

Gladly appreciate your words,

Gladly appreciate your words, madam!

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