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Crying over you

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I lie here crying over you

I just don’t know what to do

You broke my heart then you were gone
You left m to die in this world alone

i tried to fight

but wat was in my sight

it was terrifing

I saw the true you
A cruel and heartless monster
Who fed off the pain of others

I didn't want to believe it
But it became clearer with each hit
That you wanted me out of your life

So now I lay here crying
And now I lay here trying
To make it through this time without you

 

Behind The Poem: 

most of this was written by LifesShadow.... enjoy


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LifesShadow's picture

We did a great job on this

We did a great job on this one

Xxshey96xX's picture

we seem 2 b doing tht a lot

we seem 2 b doing tht a lot lol

decaf95's picture

nicely written. ending

nicely written. ending where u had started can bring back the original feeling.

Xxshey96xX's picture

thank LifesShadow 4 tht lol

thank LifesShadow 4 tht lol

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