Angels

Submitted by Miller03 on Fri, 08/05/2011 - 2:53pm |

I believe in Angels, the kind that heaven sends. I'm surrounded by angels but I call them my friends. A friend is a person who may listen attentively while you say nothing at all.

A butterfly flutters on by, it's wings whispers you name, a rose stands in a vase in the mourning sun. the scent reminds me of you. A gentle breeze blows my hair, and touches my gentle face. so many times, the word within my heart is locked by my soul.

I humbly ask this favor, if your friendship is just as great, please send your own friendship bracelet back to me, forever I will wait.

Behind The Poem:

I realized that friends are really forever and I need my friends to stay balanced, and friends are really angels sent from above.
- since i added on it goes much deeper! :)

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csarabia
08 05 2011.

Your poem just made me smile

Your poem just made me smile throughout. At first I thought you were just talking of angels and nature, but then you impacted with the power of friendship. Friends are those have the purity of companionship for you as angels and make you truly appreciate the laws of nature. Please add to this poem if you can, carry the train of thought to not only develop this poem into something stronger, but to let others know how powerful their friendship can impact another. Great Job. It was simple, but beautiful.