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One day i met a friend

who if i wanted to would be with me till the end.

You can find a friend like mine

and he  can cost you alot of time.

 

He comes in a can or a bottle

both of them will give you full throttle.

He will make your mind race

and can put you in a bad place.

 

He can make you feel down

or make feel like a clown.

He is good at making you cry

and can make you want to die.

 

This so called friend of mine has put me through hell

and i have had to live in a little cell.

I sure want to leave him alone

so i can stay in my own home.

 

I am puttting my foot down

before i end up six feet underground.

I have to let my so called friend go

and then i will have a little extra dough.

 

Let me just give you a tip

do not let my so called friend join you at the hip.

Now it is time to say good-bye

i no longer want to die.

 

Behind The Poem: 

i know this is something i need to leave alone or my life will be a mess.Alcohol has caused me to lose alot and i want to have a better life.


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Hope _Love's picture

I stopped drinking in

I stopped drinking in 1994,the day they found Curt Cobains body,I  was so freaked out that I shouted"The devil is not gonna get me!" I laid it down and that was the end of drinking and drugging.I do not know what will be your trigger,but I pray for your recovery today is a good day! Jesus Loves us and dose not want to see us perish! Love To you ! read some of my stuff ie"Frenzied".The Savior of Light is what its all about.His ways are mysterious His Wonders to perform!

cool cowgirl's picture

hi i have been sober now for

hi i have been sober now for over a year an i like the new me. thanks for praying for me. i have a very good support system here in Bozeman an it is really awsome. keep in touch an i will do the same

 

 

 

Hope _Love's picture

thanks for responding I am

thanks for responding I am happy you are doing so well,i think of you now and again. I just want to tell you that some pretty neat stuff started happening to me when I was one year sober,i pray the same for you !Good Luck and God bless1

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