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Get Me Out

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the nights are long
the walls are closing in on me
why cant i escape this prison
why cant i see anything in front of me

the people here are screaming
we all scream the same message
hear me please someone
get me out

no one heard us
we sit in the dark with tears of forbidden sorrow
drip drpo on to the concrete floor
soaked up by the dryness of the wardens soul

he walks by hits my sell door
calm down in there he says
i have not said a word
i cant say anything

my lips were sealed when i arrived
my heart was beatten when i entered the nightmare
my mind was bruised after they forced the meds in me
my soul was taken before i even came to this point in my life

the others and i will sit in this dark room forever
screaming the same thing over and over
get me out....
....of this cycle called LIFE

Comments

zannychic2002's picture

that was pretty deep.. but I

that was pretty deep.. but I see where your coming from,so good one!
It's real life emotions into a little story. Great job

Ps... a few misspellings
drip "drpo" on to the concrete floor- (drop)

he walks by hits my "sell" door- (cell)

And a Suggestion for this line to rhyme...
calm down in there he "says"- (yells)


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